Dorky comic

So I've been asked to do a 'dorky' comic for an American zine and this is what I've come up with. It's /semi/-based on something that happened to me, but I dramatised it a little. Especially the bit with the birds. Lemme know what you think plz.
R xxxx

P.S. As always, click on the images to see them BIGGER!

P.P.S. The zine, 'Terminal Fun' can be got hold of by sending your shipping info to terminal_fun_the_zine@yahoo.com. Yeah boy. x